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Request/Suggestion from :iconone-eyed-pirate:
His OC Sasha being hypnotized by Kaa and then being flattened

I changed the original idea to be saved by ~tikkimin's OC Angie instead of being flattened voluntarily by Kaa's order

Info about request and suggestions on my profile page

Note: I know I said I'm blocked atm (I was in fact slow with this comic) and had it halfway done before posting this journal [link]

nice day everyone ;P
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Alright, quite a few Problems with this.
1. Grammar! Really! We have Books for a reason!
2. The Dialogue seems Dull and Bland. It feels like I'm watching Robots play, and even they might have some Emotion!
3. Why is...dang it..what was the name of the Snake? Anyway, why did he need to be in this?
4. Who's the Blonde Chick?
5. Where did that log Come from? I see Large, Thick Grass behind everything, so it doesn't add up.
6. So you had help From Them, eh?
What were you, Desperate?